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Kayla’s Week 2 Response

Posted by Kayla Ye on

On May 18, 2017, The New York Times published three-part series called “Antarctica Dispatches”. In this series, The New York Times takes advantage of the advancement of technology to tell the story of Antarctica, the seventh continent. The first part starts off with a map of the continent and there are moving lines to show how the ice is moving, showing them move towards the Ross Sea. When you read the article itself, you learn that the ice sheets are melting at rate so rapid that scientist are worried that sooner or later, coastal cities would have to seek refuge from their own homes due to rise in sea levels. The article also goes on to explain how scientist are attempting to solve this top priority issue and to show the audience what they mean, a video is provided. The interactive video at the bottom of the article allows the viewer to move the camera around and watch the scientist equipment at work. In the article, the author stresses the importance of scientist to figure out a way to slow down the disintegration of the ice sheets and by using these visuals, this importance is stressed beyond words. The interactivity of this article allows the reader to someone experience the urgency and realize the effects that greenhouse gases have on themselves, indirectly. The visuals also act as a summarizer for the article. For people who don’t always have the time to read the full article, the visuals provided show the issue they talk about in the article following. In part two for example, as the reader scrolls, the geographical makeup of Antarctica is shown and there are short captions to indicate whats happening, acting to consolidate information. I think that this way of presenting information, especially in the STEM filed is effective because often, the information regarding STEM subject is dense and not for everyone but using these interactive ways to engage the reader’s attention can capture a wide variety of audiences.

 

Gillis, Justin, et al. “Miles of Ice Collapsing Into the Sea.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 18 May 2017, www.nytimes.com/interactive/2017/05/18/climate/antarctica-ice-melt-climate-change.html.

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Jaspreet Weekly #1 response

Posted by Jaspreet Jaswal on

The term ‘rhetoric’ simplifies into a broad understanding of how we interpret dialogues and conversations. By analyzing “Understanding Rhetoric” by authors: Elizabeth Losh, Jonathan Alexander, Zander Cannon, Kevin Cannon, we can observe the correlation between the instincts of psychology and how it attributes to the ‘rhetoric’ performance carried out by individuals like us. As the text states, ” Rhetoric is only meant to hide flaws, not encourage self-improvement.”  This statement expresses the understanding of the psychology behind the term ‘rhetoric’ as people justify their use of this exercise solely to boost their self assurance. Little do people know that this execution will create a conflict as they’re demarcating the border of actually understanding and interpreting, rather than the self affirmation of the knowledge they have gained. This performance also plays over with ethos logos and pathos since it intervenes with our feelings, logic, and moral.  Moving forward, the authors also made key reference to the term ‘Kairos’ which simply coincides to the lack of patience. I’ve personally done this many times and I’m doing it right now since this assignment is due within an hour. I will however, re-read my comment to make sure there aren’t any grammatical errors.

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Posted by Jaspreet Jaswal on

The term ‘rhetoric’ simplifies into a broad understanding of how we interpret dialogues and conversations. By analyzing “Understanding Rhetoric” by authors: Elizabeth Losh, Jonathan Alexander, Zander Cannon, Kevin Cannon, we can observe the correlation between the instincts of psychology and how it attributes to the ‘rhetoric’ performance carried out by individuals like us. As the text states, ” Rhetoric is only meant to hide flaws, not encourage self-improvement.”  This statement expresses the understanding of the psychology behind the term ‘rhetoric’ as people justify their use of this exercise solely to boost their self assurance. Little do people know that this execution will create a conflict as they’re demarcating the border of actually understanding and interpreting, rather than the self affirmation of the knowledge they have gained. This performance also plays over with ethos logos and pathos since it intervenes with our feelings, logic, and moral.  Moving forward, the authors also made key reference to the term ‘Kairos’ which simply coincides to the lack of patience. I’ve personally done this many times and I’m doing it right now since this assignment is due within an hour. I will however, re-read my comment to make sure there aren’t any grammatical errors.

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The main point of Understanding Rhetoric was that rhetoric is important in writing and conveying ideas. The author first introduced rhetoric by explaining why some people believe that rhetoric is bad. The negative ideas that people have today can be traced to Plato who was an Ancient Greek philosopher. Plato believed that rhetoric is bad because it is used to deceive people and distract people from important issues. I can understand why Plato believed this because rhetoric is used in order to persuade people. By using rhetoric, people can be persuaded into doing bad things. Aristotle, on the other hand, believed that rhetoric can be used for good. He believed it can be used to educate people to become good people. I agree with Aristotle because today, rhetoric has been used in order to make people better. For example, the use of rhetoric in advertisements in America against smoking and drinking have persuaded many people to not engage in those activities. Many kids and adults have stopped smoking or drinking because of the negative effects that ads talk about. Another point that the authors emphasized was the importance of ethos, pathos, and logos. Ethos is the credibility of the speaker or writer. Pathos is the use of emotion and logos is the use of logic. Using ethos, pathos and logos are really important in persuading the audience. I once watched a video on Facebook on how to sell anything. The video said that people buy stuff based on emotions and justify it with logic. Consumers will also buy products if the sellers are credible, usually from well-known brands. After reading this comic I realized that sellers use ethos, pathos, and logos in order to persuade consumers into buying things.

The main point of When Your Grades Are Based on Labor and Labor Log is to describe a different way of grading assignments. Assignments would be graded based on the time and effort that students put instead of mistakes. The author’s main point is that this grading system will help students become better writers. I like this grading system because it allows students to try new things without having the risk of receiving a bad grade. Also, students will receive a good grade as long as they work hard. I remember a lot of times I would work really long on an assignment only to receive a bad grade.

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zhihong week one response

Posted by ZhiHong Li on

 

After reading the cartoon, I think the idea that the cartoon reading is trying to express the point that people view the word or idea differently. Some think it is positive and some think it is negative. On page 36 the way people using the word “rhetoric” make Elizabeth Losh(one of the character in the cartoon) feel annoying which indicates the negative connotation of how people don’t understand the meaning of the word rhetoric. But it means the way of writing or speaking technique. In the cartoon Aristotle think rhetoric is about ethos, pathos and logos which his teach think he is in his own idealistic world (false world). The rhetorical question is the way to let people think of the important point in the question, but just like the cartoon showing how people think the rhetorical question is to end the conversation. The way people understand the idea make the “rhetorical question” to have the different connotation. I have experience that when I first learning English as second language, my teacher told me that when asking a “rhetorical question” there should not be an answer to the question. And I try to use rhetorical question to end the conversation in the discussion and my teacher ask me what the question is and what is the point of the question then I told my teacher that is the way I understand the rhetorical question. So, this will be different understanding of the idea because of the way people function over their brain. I agree with the key point that people view the word/idea differently according to the understanding of the explanation of the word/idea. Which the language barriers and the differences between people proceed the different connotation of the word/idea, the meaning people apply to the word/idea will depend on the way people understanding it.

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Posted by QianXing Ou on

(NOTES) Understand Rhetoric:A Graphic Guide to Writing

-From Greek : word EIRO-to say

-Questions don’t require an answer

-talk and perform/thinking

-Plato

-Rhetorics are false

-teachers are bad, only giving orders.

-Affects teens using tragedy.

– teens might pick up the negative aspects inside the tragedy show.

-Life a lot better before writing.

-ARISTOTLE (student of Plato)

– Rhetoric is foundation of education.

 

Ethos:Credibility

Pathos: usage of emotion

Logos: have to make sense/logical.

Kairo: Rhetoric is also about time

  • Use certain words in certain situation.

-Debates are very sensitive to time.

– Think before sending an email

 

When Your Grades Are based on Labor

Mistakes do not matter that much, focus on your ideas.

-Don’t try to show off

-Willing to take risk

-It is always nice to redo a assignment

-Work harder!

 

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QianXing’s Week 1 Response

Posted by QianXing Ou on

In “Understand Rhetoric:A Graphic Guide to Writing,” it talks about  many elements of writing such as rhetoric, pathos, ethos, logos, and kairos.  Rhetoric was originated from the Greek meaning to say. Basically, it means to give a space to a person to express their ideas. These includes shows, speeches and debates.  One of the Greek philosopher named Plato thought negatively about rhetoric. He thought that shows such as tragedy has negative effects on teens because teens might pick up some negative things from it.  On the other hand, Aristotle believed performing tragedy in front of teens will let them know the dangerous of doing so, which prevents them from doing it. In this case, I agree with both of them because I think shows are not the only factor that affect teens.  While it might be true that teens might pick up negative aspect from the show such as smoking and drinking alcohol, it doesn’t mean teens will always absorb these negative things, and some might even resist that. For example, when I was little, I keep watching shows about how a person betray another person. That doesn’t affect me.  I hate betraying. Therefore, even though I don’t think rhetoric in a show affect a child’s growth, sometimes it is true since child are most likely to be affected by his/her surrounding. ( I stay neutral) Also, the author is also trying to show us the importance of pathos(use of emotion), ethos(credibility), and logos(logical) in the writing. I agree with that because we need credibility, emotions and logical in our writing. Even though pathos might not be that effective in a lot of writing such as research paper, it is very effective during speeches, shows, or sometimes debate.  Personally, I think emotions are the most powerful weapon in the writing. If a speaker is having a poor background or any forms of tragedy, the speaker will mostly likely to receive more attention compare to other speakers. Also, when a character in a movie is having a poor family background, the audience will likely to feel pity about this character and want him/her to complete his/her goal. The author also introduce Kairos, which is about the importance of time. We don’t want to say any negative things during a birthday party.

The article “When your grades are based on labor” has 5 main ideas. Don’t be afraid to make mistakes, take risks, don’t write to impress others, redo the assignment might be a good thing and work harder!  I agree with these, because I was afraid of making mistakes before, so I never learn. However, right now I don’t care about mistakes, I just try , try and try until I am satisfied about my assignment. And it worked.  I learned more things and I feel more confident about myself.

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