Gabriel Almonte 

Reflection  

Grade:85 

Cover image: 10/10 

I believe I used an image that grasps a reader’s attention while also showing detail about the item I was describing. 

Abstract: 8/10 

I believe I explained the results of the lab well while introducing ideas that support why this lab is important. I should’ve gone more in depth on other ways to test whether a gun was the issue or if there were other factors that played roles, or whether other threatening objects would have a similar reaction.  

Introduction: 810  

I believe I introduced the idea that certain factors can affect human memory, but I think I should have provided more detail on how and why this is true.  

Method: 7/10 

I believe I explained the procedure fairly well but for someone who had a hard time understanding the abstract and introduction or didn’t read them wouldn’t fully grasp the exact procedure. 

Resultd:9/10 

I believe I explained the results clearly, stating the different results of the control and experimental group for each of the experiments.  

Discussion: 7/10 

I believe I discussed the issue at hand well, but I should have considered that some of my audience may not have understood the topic, so I needed to simplify it or gone more in depth so the audience can fully grasp the idea. 

Conclusion: 9/10 

I believe I wrapped up the lab report well while explaining why the lab report was important, some ways this can affect the real world, the results of the lab, and left off with a question on how to improve the procedure that may cause different results.  

For assignment #2 we were assigned to write a technical description about an imaginary object. I decided to write it on ironman’s helmet. I went into deep detail on many parts of the helmet. I described all the features of the helmet. I explained why certain protective parts were in place, I also explained the purpose of certain lights on the helmet. While explaining all these parts and their functions I also explained how many of these functions would be useful to ironman while he would be using the suit.  I believe I grasped all aspects of the assignment that were trying to be addressed with this assignment.