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Sambeg’s Weekly Response#2

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Sambeg Raj Subedi
ENGL 21007-S
Prof. Jesse Rice-Evans
Weekly Assign#2
02/11/2019

On Feb. 11, 2019, The New York Times published an article called “A.I. Shows Promise as a Physician Assistant”. It was written by Cade Metz. This article mainly focused on the latest achievement obtained in the healthcare field through Artificial Intelligence. Being a Computer Science student it was a great pleasure to know the positive impact of “Deep Learning” in almost every field including healthcare, transportation, communication and so on. Being specific to this article, it was mentioned that scientists had built a system that automatically diagnoses common childhood conditions — from influenza to meningitis — after processing the patient’s symptoms, history, lab results, and other clinical data. According to researchers, the system was highly accurate and one day may assist doctors in diagnosing complex or rare conditions. In order to build this system, researchers drew the records of nearly 600,000 Chinese patients who had visited a pediatric hospital over an 18-month period and this vast collection of data was used to train the so-called A.I. system. This system relies on a neural network which is a breed of artificial intelligence. It was also mentioned that Dr. Zhang and his colleagues have created a system that can diagnose an even wider range of conditions by recognizing patterns in text, not just in medical images, which can spot-check and make sure the physician didn’t miss anything. While comparing the results from the system and experienced physicians, it was observed that the A.I. system was more than 90 percent accurate at diagnosing asthma while the accuracy of physicians in the study was just 80 percent.
Making a rhetorical analysis of this article, I think this article was mainly intended for students, healthcare professionals, and policymakers. Being informative in nature, it was well organized and had appropriate references displaying authors credibility. This article made me more interested in the technology which on the other hand shows authors ability to emotionally evoke the reader’s interest toward the subject. This article initially started with a crisis of doctors in the US and finally ended up with an alternative as an A.I. system, which perfectly makes a logical sense in today’s context. Thus, in this article, all the necessary elements Ethos, Pathos, Legos and, Kairos were properly used which makes this article more powerful and effective.

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Jaspreet Weekly Assignment #2

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In the text, ‘Construction of Bridges’, the author Raymond Wong analyzed and shared his knowledge of the construction of bridges, and how it functions to serve civilization as whole. Wong, initially brings about the information of Bridges by correlating its aspects to the field of STEM which explicitly stands for: Science, Technology, Engineering, and Math. Although Wong did not state how people from different fields and knowledge cooperate with one another, Wong imply that the construction of massive bridges requires a lot of knowledge from people with different backgrounds in their profession. For example, it takes not only a civil engineer to construct a bridge, but an architect for the blueprint as well as electricians to install lights in the bridge. Moreover, Wong provided visual diagrams of bridges and different types of bridges. There are bridges with suspensions which bears the weight and extend beneath the bridge itself. There are also beam bridges and arch bridges differing in all shapes and sizes. Wong furthermore provided where certain types of bridges stand in the world. From his text, we can see a balanced cantilever bridge for viaduct of West Rail at Au Tau Interchange. Many third world countries are now expanding on their knowledge of STEM allowing their society to build fascinating structures like bridges as bridges serve to show a conjunction of unity not only through practical uses but metaphorically as well. From the picture provided in the text, we can pinpoint the span for the cantilever bridge expands from 50m to 300m. In perspective, an average adult male stands merely at 1.8m! As civilization throughout the world expands, the education push for STEM will grow.

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        The article “Tapping Signals Replacement for Keyboards” written by John Kosowatz , Senior Editor, ASME.org  uses visual elements to help reader understand more about the how the TAP wearable device works and the benefits of using it.  The first picture on the article shows that “ a man is using the TAP to navigate Hololens AR headset. Image: TAP Systems” . It demonstrates reader about the function of the TAP. TAP allows a user to tap letters, numbers and words into a device without a keyboard. It gives the reader a better understanding of the advantages of TAP and why it is more convenient than normal keyboard. One of the primary advantage visual elements offers is simplicity. For example, when you get lost by reading a long article, you can find it easier and faster by looking at picture to get the information the author wanted to express. Visual elements are relatively more eye-pleasing. When presenting an amazing shot, it makes people relaxed. A funny picture makes people laugh and will help people memorize the information better.

The second picture in the article shows readers the actual product, it is a “wearable keyboard, mouse and game controller that connects to most Bluetooth enabled devices. Image: TAP Systems”. It helps the reader remember the product.

when people cannot understand foreign language, a picture will remove the language barrier. This is the reason that many article use visual elements in addition to words to send message. Visual charts and graphics can be posted online, put beside the website  on anywhere audible. Such flexible communication form can bridge geographic distance and cross cultural differences.

Visual elements prevails in the efficiency of communication. For example, a bar chart helps the reader find out the first and last item at a glance. A line chart on stock with an uprising arrow tells readers immediately that the stock trend is increasing and favorable.

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Luke Kuechly is one of my favorite athletes ever. He is also the star player for my favorite sports team, the Carolina Panthers. This article, written by Jourdan Rodrigue, explains a small piece of technology that Kuechly is wearing this season to help prevent concussions using text, photographs and videos.
This mysterious piece of equipment is not seen commonly yet in the NFL and is called Q collar. Kuechly has had issues in the past with concussions which is common in the NFL. The Q collar is in prototype phase and through research of woodpeckers it has been developed. The article explains that woodpeckers tongue puts pressure on its jugular vein when pecking to limit or eliminate head trauma.
You can see how this piece of technology would be hard to visualize with out images. Furthermore, when Kuechly is wearing the Q collar in a game you can hardly notice it. The images show that it is a small collar worn around the neck. The collar presses slightly on the jugular vein of the player, this slows fluid outflow from the brain allowing the brain more cushion from fluids. An example was given by Dr Gregory Myer on the thought process behind the Q collar, “By putting a small “kink in the hose so that extra blood volume is filling that free space…we’re just filling up that free expandable space, so the brain has less room to move in the skull.” The images show how the collar attaches to the neck using a bouncy ball as an example. Other images also show Kuechly in action wearing it along with several videos.
The Q collar is still in a preliminary stage and not yet proven to decrease head trauma. With NFL careers becoming shorter and shorter due to concussions, players are willing to try extreme ideas and technology to prolong their careers and save their brain long term.

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Hidden Forest

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This article is trying to inform the reader of this area in Africa that has not been interfered by humans. The use pictures to show the different species that they have found and help the reader to better get an idea of the type of animals that the scientist encountered in the forest. It can also be said that the intent of the article was to encourage the young to protect special places like these ones that are not harmed by humans. The visual images also give the reader an understanding of how steep the mountain is and how remote it is. This will help the reader to better understand why no one has ever gone to even go up there. They also show potential animals that can be new species that the scientist has discovered and help the reader have a visual of the animals that live in the area. The images convey to the primary message, this place has been out of touch with the rest of the world and we should make efforts to protect these places against people. This images shows what life that lives in this area and through the appeal to emotion, seeing all these nice animals living in the forest, we shouldn’t bother them and leave them alone. Also, the image of the how the mountain was formed is a good visual way to help the reader better understand what erosion can do on a great scale. It clearly is also described in the captions with the images as to how over time what erosion has done to that area and has change the geography of the area.

        
-Tanvir Youhana

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QianXing’s Week 2 Response

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In The New York Times article “ How to land on Mars” written by Jonathan Corum,the main idea is about the process of a spacecraft lands on theMars.  It will take six months of traveling in order for a spacecraft to arrive to Mars. After its arrival, there are many steps that the spacecraft needs take in order to avoid the failure of landing. First of all, scientist have to make sure that the timing and the location that they are going to aim is correct, so they can avoid the dust storms on Mars. Then after the spacecraft is ready, it will travel within Mars’ atmosphere at a speed of 12,300 miles/hour.  However, the spacecraft must land with a degree of 12 in order to successfully land on Mars, because if the spacecraft is too steep, it will burn and if it is too shallow, it will just pass through the atmosphere and return the space. While the spacecraft is passing through the atmosphere, the parachute inside the craft will pop out and slows down the landing. Lastly, the legs of the spacecraft will also pop out to make sure that the spacecraft lands. Since the distance between Earth and Mars is really far, it takes 8 minutes and 7 seconds for the communication signal to sent to Earth, so the scientist do not know whether the spacecraft fail or not until they have waited for a long time.  

The diagrams on this article really help me to understand the entire article. I feel like without the diagram, I will not understand what the article is trying to say because I have never see a spacecraft before and I never learn about how a spacecraft will function and the usage of visuals give me an image of what’s going on.  In addition, introducing those images will also prevent me from getting tired of the reading. Also, just by reading those images, you also get figure out the intent of the autor without reading the entire article which is to show the audience about the process of landing on the Mars. Overall, visuals are really helpful in boosting the understand of reader and providing the reader a very brief summary. I would compare the relationship with texts and visuals with a song.  Texts are just like the lyrics of a song, while visuals is like a rhythm. Without any of these, a song will not be complete.

 

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